Wednesday 16th March 2011
Tramps Best Day – 2nd Edit
Following Tuesdays filming of the Tramp character sitting on the bench dozing against a Blue Screen (instead of the usual green screen) thoughts turned to how we as a group of student filmmakers were going to edit the 5 minute film sequence down to a sequence just 2 minutes long.
I wondered if it could be possible to include the entire 5 minute sequence by using split screen and dividing the footage up. By giving each partition a different start time in this way we could include the green screen, that is the green screen footage as well as the all the live footage and keep the sequence to be just 2 minutes long but all of the scenes would be on screen.
The only way to test this would be to do an edit and see how it would look. The result is below and to be honest I do not think it works but let me know what you think.
Tramps best Day – 3rd edit
This is my latest edit of the Tramp footage this time I’ve set myself the target of a total duration of 2 minutes and the sequence must start with an image of the Bus Stop and must end with a close up of a bikes wheel and include the green screen footage even though we were to discard this in the final edit.
Due to the benefit of having already captured my footage and previous editing attempts it was relatively simple to identify what to include and exclude from the video. In the end I removed the Aviary scene and most of the footage showing the Tramps character pushing the bike from scene to scene. By doing this I had achieved an edit of 1 minute 50 seconds which meant I could go back and look at some of the clips and see if if by adding some footage back would improve the overall composition or assist in the narrative.
Although the final video fits the brief I have to conclude that I prefer the split screen or montage of the 2nd edit.
My suggestion for the final sequence.
I think it would improve the final result if we considered the following:-
- Drop the Green Screen sequence of the Tramp day dreaming on the bench – it just does not add anything to the video.
- Use the Montage/Split Screen design but with a couple of changes:-
- First change start the video with a full screen image of the Bus Stop and then scale this down and push it into the top left region of the screen.
- 2nd change End the video with a full screen image of the bikes wheel by scaling up the image from the bottom right region of the screen.
- So the top left image runs from the start for 2 minutes and say the bottom right starts 2 minutes from the end.
- The other 2 regions on the screen should start from a different scene.
- Overall the whole footage should be shown somewhere be it in region 1,2,3 or 4.
- Use the soundtrack from the Montage edit – it works really well.
What do I think? well it works but it needs some finishing touches for example the scaling of the Bus Stop opening needs to be speeded up. The actual screen divides are too regular and would be improved my making none of the videos the same size. The final sequence of the cycle wheel needs to be re-shot as a new sequence with the final image showing the wheel completely and directly facing the camera full framed.
Of course these are my thoughts and the final edit will come down to what the group decides and of course the director should have the final say. Although in the real world it’s usually the Producers decision usually after test screenings in front of an invited audience.